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Hey, Can anybody give me a quick critique?

Postby zozo on 08/9/2008, 8:33 pm

There are a few things I know I need to work on like the start of the growth and the lightening but I think I have a handle on what to do with those.

The big problem I'm having is trying to slow down the particles enough to make the distance believable without losing the density. I need this thing to look VERY far off but massively huge at the same time. To that end the speed across the horizon isn't working either but that is an easy fix.

I welcome all suggestions and ideas. Thanks in advance for the input.

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Re: Hey, Can anybody give me a quick critique?

Postby bwoogie on 08/9/2008, 8:40 pm

Can you try lowering the Velocity and Increasing the Birth Rate? I'm guessing you're using Particular? I don't have Particular so I can't give you much input on that...

As for the lightning, I've never seen lightning inside a tornado. I would suggest putting the lightning on the left side of the screen. You could also duplicate the clouds and mask out a section a increase the brightness when the lightning strikes.

Check out Aharon Rabinowitz's tutorial on creating weather.
http://library.creativecow.net/articles ... ther_1.php
The reset button was my idea.
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Re: Hey, Can anybody give me a quick critique?

Postby dataflow on 08/9/2008, 8:42 pm

look ok for start

few things i would fix are

the color more lighter grey
debri/object at base that come from the ground
and a shadow on the footage ground of the tornado.
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Re: Hey, Can anybody give me a quick critique?

Postby Fabian on 08/9/2008, 8:49 pm

looks good so far! yeah I agree with dataflow: the color should be lighter grey.
try to make the tornado less opaque and use match grain on the tornado!
After that add noise to the plate and the tornado and add a little camera shake like wiggle(5,15) or something like that! Should look alot better this way!
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Re: Hey, Can anybody give me a quick critique?

Postby Ben Wotton on 08/9/2008, 9:19 pm

yeah I agree with dataflow and speedbreaker. It is a nice effect but just needs that little bit more. add those things and it will look great. :)

Also, don't tornado's come from the clouds to the ground, not the reverse?
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Re: Hey, Can anybody give me a quick critique?

Postby dataflow on 08/9/2008, 9:24 pm

yeah they form in the clouds but you start seeing the base first (from the debri)

http://www.metacafe.com/watch/73261/tornado_is_born/

here is a good ref video

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DNL7ASvl4k4

and some study on how tornado's form

http://www.nssl.noaa.gov/edu/safety/tornadoguide.html
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Re: Hey, Can anybody give me a quick critique?

Postby zozo on 08/9/2008, 9:29 pm

Actually they sort of form both on the ground and from the clouds and meet somewhere in between but I'll worry about that later! :)

Does anybody have any suggestions on how to push this storm about 10 miles away?! I will mask out the horizon spillover later. This is a killer F5!!

A few other things I have tried was using Depth of field on the comp camera but that didn't have any effect for some reason.
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Re: Hey, Can anybody give me a quick critique?

Postby dataflow on 08/9/2008, 9:33 pm

there reason it looks like it forms on the ground is because you cant see a tornado untell it collects debri from the ground.

first video in my last post show that happening

covering the the base of tornado with foreground on footage will help make it look far away
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