Comet effects test

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Comet effects test

Postby jtmrfilms on 08/8/2008, 8:59 am

Heres latest effect I've done for a film I'm Preping at the moment. Looking for some constructive critism please (both positive and improvements). Known issues are, colour correction could be better (working on that atm) and clouds are a little too fuzzy. apart from that i'd love some opinions.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ORoWkBrUIoQ
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Re: Comet effects test

Postby europa on 08/8/2008, 10:06 am

It's a fairly good job, let's see what's to improve:

1) Colors
2) Clouds are too blurred
3) Camera movement is too abrupt: ease the keyframes (F9)
4) You could make some water-fx when the comet is passing over it
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Re: Comet effects test

Postby Leigh on 08/8/2008, 10:14 am

I agree with both of you, so I really have no idea why I'm posting :oops:

That's right, I think you need to speed up the comet hitting the ground just a little faster, other than that and the improvements you mentioned, it should turn out really good!

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