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Need your ideas guys :)

Postby Sascha on 08/24/2008, 12:43 pm

Hey, heres my latest Test for a station ID.

http://vimeo.com/1594198

Its a bit empty, so i'd like to have some of your advices what to add to this animation... My head is full of so many crap, but nothing suits to this animation :(
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Re: Need your ideas guys :)

Postby Dan on 08/24/2008, 2:06 pm

Oooo... i like

Nice and clean

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Re: Need your ideas guys :)

Postby Henry on 08/24/2008, 5:43 pm

Maybe add a zoom, or move the camera a bit. And a couple particles that flow by when the text switches.

Looks really good, can't think of much to add.
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Re: Need your ideas guys :)

Postby pyroteknik on 08/24/2008, 6:58 pm

I agree with Henry, other than that I think it looks awesome. Very clean and very professional looking. Well done.
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Re: Need your ideas guys :)

Postby Leigh on 08/24/2008, 8:48 pm

Looks great!

Personally I wouldn't add camera movement or particles because every man and his dog is doing that sort of stuff at the moment. If I was to suggest anything, maybe pan the background ever so slightly over the time, and maybe slightly kern the second title as it gets revealed by the boxed frame.

Or, leave it! It does work! 8-)
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Re: Need your ideas guys :)

Postby VFX-Anomaly on 08/24/2008, 9:50 pm

Noddy wrote:Looks great!

Personally I wouldn't add camera movement or particles because every man and his dog is doing that sort of stuff at the moment. If I was to suggest anything, maybe pan the background ever so slightly over the time, and maybe slightly kern the second title as it gets revealed by the boxed frame.

Or, leave it! It does work! 8-)


Again I disagree, just not my night I guess,
I would do a camera move especially if you extend the title intro, but not a zoom specifically, do a fast pan right or left with a zoom to a new scene,
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Re: Need your ideas guys :)

Postby Sascha on 08/25/2008, 5:38 am

Thanks guys for your suggestions!
I'll try some things out or leave it like it is. I'll post my finished work when its done in the work section :)

Thanks again.

greetings from germany
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Re: Need your ideas guys :)

Postby sboltonjr on 08/25/2008, 2:32 pm

Maybe just a simple cc light sweep at the end on the text , when I try to do my animations I try not to kill motion because a static image at any point for me shows motionless video. But other then that good job, I like it.
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