My Second Jet Video,Please Check It Out

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My Second Jet Video,Please Check It Out

Postby akanselim on 02/18/2014, 11:01 am

Here is the video i have been working for my school.
Link:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=emAtZHEm0E0
First of all i really want to thank to you for all your support on my previous video because you helped me a lot with your comments,i hope you enjoy!
Please let me know what do you think
Music:Hans Zimmer-Modern Warfare 2 Album
Not:Please if u like it,dont forget to subscribe my channel...That will help me more than you can imagine...
King Regards
The Explorer Production-Akan Selim
(I am just a beginner-1 year- lol)
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Re: My Second Jet Video,Please Check It Out

Postby AlekB on 02/18/2014, 6:47 pm

The animation looks pretty good! Two thoughts: I think the highlights are blown-out too much, a little can add realism, too much looks CG, at least in my opinion. Also: on the shot of the plane taking off, the heat distortion is a bit strong I think. Lower it's distortion and possibly make it higher frequency, if that makes sense. Make the particles causing that distortion move faster, I think. I'm not sure on that. Good work over all though!
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Re: My Second Jet Video,Please Check It Out

Postby akanselim on 02/19/2014, 5:45 am

AlekB wrote:The animation looks pretty good! Two thoughts: I think the highlights are blown-out too much, a little can add realism, too much looks CG, at least in my opinion. Also: on the shot of the plane taking off, the heat distortion is a bit strong I think. Lower it's distortion and possibly make it higher frequency, if that makes sense. Make the particles causing that distortion move faster, I think. I'm not sure on that. Good work over all though!

Could u tell me where or in which time period is there too much highlights or CG ?
Thank you for ur comment
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Re: My Second Jet Video,Please Check It Out

Postby AlekB on 02/19/2014, 4:45 pm

At 1:41 I feel like the highlights are really strong. It's kind of a color grading style, but it also looks really computer generated to me. In the shot at 1:14 I feel like the background is too bright, mostly where the sun is. But that's all, really. It's largely a style thing, but I think bringing it down a bit would make it more realistic. Anyways, those are my thoughts.
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