Recently Completed VFX/Editing on a Short Film (Feed Back?)

[JasonRugg]

I recently completed Editing/VFX for a short film, If I could get some feed back, that'd be great!

Most of the VFX occurs around/after 2:20. But there's a lot of little things through out.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UPzBO-tM ... ature=plcp

Thanks!