Old piece of work (I made this sometime last year)

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Old piece of work (I made this sometime last year)

Postby Director on 08/1/2008, 6:53 pm

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Re: Old piece of work (I made this sometime last year)

Postby Patrick Mazzolo on 08/1/2008, 6:57 pm

Very cool, Keep it up!

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Re: Old piece of work (I made this sometime last year)

Postby adam545 on 08/1/2008, 7:29 pm

nice planets and space there 8-) although im not too fond of the text at the bottom. looks to "stuck-on".
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Re: Old piece of work (I made this sometime last year)

Postby Patrick Mazzolo on 08/1/2008, 7:48 pm

adam545 wrote:nice planets and space there 8-) although im not too fond of the text at the bottom. looks to "stuck-on".


I agree. A different font that fitted the theme would have been a good idea.
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Re: Old piece of work (I made this sometime last year)

Postby RA.Elliott on 08/1/2008, 9:53 pm

I think the text would've looked good, even with the glow, if it was 75% smaller... but those planets are ballin'. Also, there is some smoke around the left of the planet on the bottom is a bit out of place...
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Re: Old piece of work (I made this sometime last year)

Postby norin on 08/1/2008, 11:21 pm

I'm going to echo the same theme here. The image itself is pretty spiffy, but the text.... I really don't like the 'motion blur' effect. If you were to do this over (or if you still have the .psd) I would consider working on that text. It could blend with the rest of the image quite a bit better. Also, you might want to try a little less of a pure white color, it just doesn't fit with the overall color scheme you've got going on there.
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Re: Old piece of work (I made this sometime last year)

Postby Director on 08/2/2008, 8:44 am

I agree with the text, but other than that, how do you guys/gals feel about the main image? Thanks for the criticism, it helps me in the future. :)
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Re: Old piece of work (I made this sometime last year)

Postby CreaX on 08/2/2008, 10:01 am

great work!!!!!!
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Re: Old piece of work (I made this sometime last year)

Postby Wellington on 08/9/2008, 7:55 pm

cool.
Nice job!
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Re: Old piece of work (I made this sometime last year)

Postby patrick on 08/23/2008, 1:59 am

yeah, its prety good :D , but why the black border, and the text inside it. It subtracts from the realistic effect
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